lil child come to me..i can see dat u r sad...
lil child dont cry....i know da things wil change..
lil child dont be angry...u are too fragile for that...
lil child come to my arms nd feel da warmth...
u are too young to kill so many things wid in u ...
u r too blessed to allow hatred in ur heart...
lil child dont go away...oh angl sit wid me....
let me tell u a truth....no mother can hate her kid...
no mother can be angry for long...
yes u were not born out of my womb ..
..but the person u are rite now is born out of my love..
yes u hav sinned....yes u hav wounded me wid ur acts....
but as u know sins are to b forgiven nd wounds are to b healed...
oh sweet child dont b so sad...
oh u lil devil u apologize nd i forgive....
is nt dis da way for a gud life ?
oh my child i will leave u better of....
i want to give u da courage to live alone...
i want u to learn from my life...
oh my child i want to tell u dat
u will always be loved for the good things u hav done....
nd my child u will be sentenced for ur blunders...
but dis is life my child...
nd dis is a good life....
Kaafi accha hai likha ji :) Keep up the good work !! From next time,try not to use the SMS language..I personally feel the exact language better portrays the feelings and emotions :)
ReplyDeleteI agree with Mandy..
ReplyDeleteohk dosto...aage se literary language :) lov u both
ReplyDeleteLove it. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Mirza !!!! :)
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